Comments : Our Queen

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    AWH!!!! iwanna cry!!! i can't belive you made this poem about me!! i'm not that strong but i do try lol you are right about that lol this is a good way to start the day lol i never had a poem dedicated to me and this is above all impressive my favorite part of this great poem would have to be

    The queen sits upon her throne of hearts
    Red and black mixing caustically
    Her chin lifted, her emotions she has set apart
    From her heart, feeling no pain, but leaving her exhausted.
    To whom will she give her love next?
    He or she, leaving us in the dark
    Where she no longer stands but looks within
    Hauntingly lingering on the edge of its seductive call, she hears its hark.
    She walks along the imperfect road
    ^^^ this pretty much sums up my life lol good job sweetie this is a wonderful before bday present!!! :) long live me i guess? lol thanks Raven for this poem!!!

    Queen Ashlin

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    You are extremely strong Queen Ashlin, and Brittany this is such a fabulous poem, truly loved it, every word of it, so remarkable, you guys are both truly awesome people!!! 100/100

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    You are extremely strong Queen Ashlin, and Brittany this is such a fabulous poem, truly loved it, every word of it, so remarkable, you guys are both truly awesome people!!! 100/100