Wow Rusheena, I would never have imagined this idea from the title, not ever!

I love that you took a fact in history and also a person and their story and brought it to life for people to be aware of.

I don't know if you meant this or not but your last two stanza's say beautiful biy and not a beautiful boy? I don't think it works as well without the a, as in the first stanza has. But perhaps that is only me.

I really like the image of the birds and the word vultures, very very powerful and fitting to these people who did such awful things. I also like the mention of beaks because I feel it relates to the words people say an do not realise ( or care ) about their meaning or impact.

Fantasitc job. Really am impressed with this one of yours, very unique. It touches me that you write about something that happened before we were born and I was unaware of this event. I like the thought that his name lives on through this poem.

xx

Wow this is amazing and honestly thats all i know how to say about this piece besides the fact i wouldnt have guessed it from the list of titles either. Wow

Yes, no one can guess anything with this titlle
A story is like a poem. well penned.

At first when I read this, I thought the Bobo referred to the Bobo doll experiment.
This is really beautiful, simplistic, but the metaphor is just very clear. It's sweet that you wrote this and I feel like its very calming.