Inferno (Shadorma)

by Rusheena   Mar 23, 2013


I see hell
in your eyes, yet they
entice me.
They lure
me into your arms, as I
abandon safety.

*Inspired by Baby Rainbow's title challenge and the movie Queen of the Damned*

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  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Eh you know what happens when you fall in love you say darn the problems lol

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Love the rhyming lol i SERIOUSLY think this pretty much sums up my ex ex that i had lol i won't say any alarming about him but ummm i had this feeling when i was with him i KNEW he'd destroy me but i didn't care hell this poem is like a second skin and i can feel the emotions and the layers of this poem! :) great job girl! :")

    Queen Ashlin

    • 11 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Thanks, and that sucks :/

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I like how you noticed the evil. yet you like it . because evil is deep inside you . I too wish it was a bit longer. but that's what makes a story\poem great.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved this, actually I love the form, still trying to pen my own piece with enough oomph to get the point across but you did it brilliantly Rusheena,

    and I love that you've used the inspiration to create such a dark write, but its great to leave it wide open for us to interpret and decide the ending.

    Really awesome write, girl...lovely :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Ohhhhhh I LOVE this! You didn't need a lot of superfluous language to convey a strong image, and it was just BEAUTIFUL.

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