Love? Attraction.

by Mimed Lovette   Mar 24, 2013


.........You.........................stood
.......by the....................corner seat
...tugging your shirt.....over your love
..handles as if you were carrying them
....in the wrong places. I do not mind.
......I do not mind at all. I just know
.......that I was heavily attracted to
................your awkward pose.
.................Your pointed nose.
....................Your poignant
..........................prose.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Simply Lovely!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You do have the most amazing rhyming poems! They flow oh so effortlessly. I so wish I had that talent. Anyways.. not what I initially thought this poem was going to start out as but so creative with the direction you took. Very creative. This is the way true love should be, looks shouldn't be everything & often the little odd imperfections, whether physical or emotional, is what attracts us most to them. So very well done.

    • 11 years ago

      by Mimed Lovette

      I actually wrote this like 5 minutes before leaving the house but they didn't have the save option so i had to publish it before returning home to edit it. So what you read was the unedited version but i am glad you liked it! It was supposed to be in a shape of a heart though! And sadly it wasn't reflected in the way that i wanted it to be :( but thank you for your lovely comment. :))

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