Comments : Hitchiker

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    The starting stanza and this line:

    White lines
    drawing the journey before me. -

    and then the ending...

    and although this is what I've been waiting for
    I must admit
    that I feel
    a little naked. -

    well from start to finish, made me hooked on this piece!!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Very good story telling, its make the reader want to read on and on.....