Yaki, You always manage to write such passionate poetry, it has that emotion to it, almost scrambled,too eager to be penned but it still turns into a masterpiece every time.

I wasn't crazy about the overuse of Stephanie, because its a name that isn't easy to pronounce when trying t read as fast as the pace requires but I guess that's how it was meant to be, because she is too difficult to express, too hard to know, too unruly to calm.

what crushed and blinded me, could still be
something that could set her free, and give
her clarity, that things that would make me
stay with one of my lovers, could possibly
be things that might make her leave hers

^^^I LOVED THIS PART
You managed to create the feeling of how we are all different and find different events easier than others and make different choices.

You are amazing, girl, and I love you!!!

:) x