Great job Michael. Just keep sharing your tantalizing nuggets of inspired thoughts.

However, fix the word "friends" in the 4th line and you should not separate the word "whatever", it should be together.

keep writing!

I like it :), thumbs up

I was about to mention what Kips said, there is a typo in friends, and what ever should be together. but whatever lol kidding.

this made me think of summer, mainly for the reference to a sun, I imagine a sunny day and kids playing and having fun.

I like this poem, warm sun,bright outdoors and loads of fun!! Actually reminds me of summer!

A really cute short poem! I love it, it keeps me smiling thinking about sunnier days in my life. This is the best kind of poems, simple, love, relaxing and after reading it you feel lighter