Love Me Within (Shadorma)

by Meme   Mar 24, 2013


Hold me as
a beautiful thought
that never
came to life,
and don't surrender your lips
to sigh in my name.

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© Copyright 2013 by: gIrL
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** The Shadorma is a Spanish poetic form made up of a stanza of six lines (sestet) with no set rhyme scheme. It is a syllabic poem with a meter of 3/5/3/3/7/5.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was beautiful Meme, and you took the form and completely covered it in gorgeousness and top quality penmanship.

    The title was quite intriguing too, and I loved that touch to it, you really captured me in such few lines, always a sign that something is beautiful and amazingly written :)
    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is a wonderful poem, I fell in love with it, great job, 100/100

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Your comments mean a lot to me guys just like this piece is. Its a very personal one and it touches me so deep...

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Nomination.

    This is stunning....The beauty that can come from this form is incredible...

    LOVE the title...I am a huge title fan, and what I loved most about your title was that it gave a definition to what you were saying in the piece.....love me within, meaning just keep you a thought, dont do anything to prove your love (physically)...almost a way of saying move on as well.

    Very beautiful!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Beautiful! I like that we only get a snippet of what's going on, especially since the romance sounds complicated. It's like the two lovers are the only ones, who truly know why their relationship got the way that it did, and the only we can do is sit back and watch. Nice piece!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I'm very very happy to see Hellon nominate this, because it deserves to be highlighted.

    Meme you truly took this form and made it your own.. I love the elegance within...

    Oh mercy the entire piece is breathtaking!

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Again, thanks to you for introducing this new forms to us :)