Wow, that is so powerful, it really called out to the reader. I felt such force inside my gut as I read it, and my wrists called out to your strength. You are trulya strong person and have a powerful heart, frozen as it is, it writes very meaniful and wonderful poetry, dark and powerful!! Wonderufl job

Sweetie... It broke my heart to read this... You're a lovely person inside and out, your poetry tells the story of you, but it rarely tells of the good parts. I like this a lot, I couldn't help but finish reading. Nicely done... 5/5

OK. 5/5

Ash, this is powerful... I mean though this poem is explicit, it carries a lot of truth and the sad reality of those helpless girls who have gone through so much that their lives' outcome is sick and blunt!
I love the energy of this poem, the upfront nature and a call out that goes far beyond words!
Amazing...
Keep penning:)

Wow i like it
good flow and pacing

I love this! bless your little heart.

These are so true and naturals, but it hearts life is not so black

This poem is very explicit ,but I feel that it relayed a very strong emotion that it took much skill and courage to share

Good strong hearted wording awesome I want to try and write an explicit/erotic poem I have the words but just can't quite put the words together 5/5 you are an awesome writer hehehehe

Good strong hearted wording awesome I want to try and write an explicit/erotic poem I have the words but just can't quite put the words together 5/5 you are an awesome writer hehehehe

Very emotive!

Excellent expression! Top poem indeed ! 5/5 for me!

The rawness was nice..

This was raw o.o afterall, people in the profession of prostitution also have emotions ._. I liked this poem, straight from the heart <3

I am into this kind of writing, I tend to not keep with rules or rhyme schemes. I think my main critique is this is less than a poem and more of a scream. While that can be very effective, I feel you are trying to validate yourself by belittling those that use you, yet the power they are given is only received by you. So in the end the spiral began with you. Or whoever this may be about. I am not trying to point blame but the dreams you once had can still be had, you just have to admit you still deserve it.

This poem showcases a lot of bitterness, anger and loneliness... bitter towards people who use her constantly, her 'clients' I suppose... anger towards herself as well as the people who constantly use/abuse her... and then loneliness, because even though she is surrounded by people and men who may 'want' and 'lust' after her, they don't 'love her...and in the end, that's what she wants...even though she says it is 'cold' and she doesn't want love...I don't believe that's true, it's human nature to want to be loved and to love someone in return.

Raw emotions throughout, like it!

Great poem, as I read "Give me pleasure and pain,
That's all I want now,
No love to fill my heart,
All that's left is a frozen one," I got chills

Bless your little heart! Some of my best friends are wh@#$ keep up the good work and tell your friends to indulge. If you cant find true love (has to be there somewhere?)Practice until you can. remember:love comes in spurts!!!!!!!!!

Wow