Abandoned (Englyn milwr)

Í guess this was a club challenge because this is a ne form for me but I've seen a couple of them around of late? I'm not going to check the format..it's very short and...I'm pretty sure you will have it spot on so...

My tears fall like pouring rain,
trying to accept the pain
you have left me once again.

^^^

My own opinion...I'm not a great lover of the word like...it's just a little over used I feel? My suggestion replace it with as....