Eternal Love (Shadorma)

by Baby Rainbow   Mar 25, 2013


Love is when
hearts bind together,
connecting
beats of hope;
promising eternity
for the rest of time.

Saffie
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20/3/13

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  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    Love truly is eternal and I agree with every word you say. Hearts do bind together and you become one with the person. You connect so well with that person and feel like you can love forever. Hope is in every heartbeat you take as happiness shines through in love. It really does because it feels like when you are in love you are in your own little world. Like nothing can ever bring you down from the high you feel. I love the eternal part the most because love makes you feel like you are floating or flying. I think of angel's or ghost with eternity. I love the deep meaning here as it showshow love is and your love is pitch perfect. Well done. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    Loooove this piece!!!
    "hearts bind together" <--- woow this is strong, that says a lot about love.
    The promises and the use of hope thats perfect.
    This is a little master piece:)
    Awesome job!!