Walking down the dirt road,
one full of cracks,
symbolizing life's imperfections
decorating your path.

^^^^ this kinda made me think of "Our Queen" sorry it's just out of balance you could change it a little and it wouldn't stand out to me as much as the other i LOVE the ending part...of the poem 4/5 sorry Raven

Queen Ashlin

Great job, I really liked reading this poem, it screamed out to me, I especially loved the first verse, it has so much to sooth the soul and rebuke any shame at being alive, I really liked reading it, and I love this poem, another great poem

I just read it again and fell in love with the second verse, it is so meaningful and splendid