Upon my wounded heart's scars
Unable to be read but rather felt
As I try to love again so indescribably hard
Saying that I found a way to get lost in you,
And I can't find my way back...
But I find hate and distrust so true
So strong that maybe it's enough to pull away....
To rid myself of the demon I love.
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that i just love there are some spelling mistakes to me and well everything else is good but one thing the way it ended sounds like there should be a second part to it for some insane reason to me so make ANOTHER poem and tell how it goes out for both okay? thanks Raven for making a good poem to read 5/5

Queen Ashlin