Oh my...

Saffie, the reptition in this piece was AWESOME..you had repeated lines spread out in different stanzas of your piece and I thought that was so intriguing!

I'm totally in love with this piece , which is different for me, I would usually think something like this lacks detail, but this did not....shows a little bit of frustration!

Very well done girl, I love it!

I dont know why this is downrated!!!
This is really awesome, and so perfectly written.
The so sad and touching. Great job Saffie :)