SIN INTO ACCEPTANCE
by Joshua Jackson Mar 26, 2013
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Born to find a way |
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11 years agoby AngelDust
Very good write!! I really enjoyed this. The flow is flawless and I love the ending. The last word is the last stanza was nonrhyming. Good call!! It made the whole piece. Interesting subject also. I look forward to seeing more :-)
Danika. -
11 years ago
This poem is truly unique, I like how you mentioned that no one can stay sinless, despite their good heart or intentions. We all have sinned and have made many mistakes, but we can't accomplish nothing by dwelling on sins we've already committed. I think this is a strong poem and that the simple words used makes it better.
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11 years ago
Thank you very much. That really makes me feel good. I am new to this website and hope to continue to make poems you guys will like. I will also read all of your poems as well.... Thanks very much!!!!!
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