This poem is truly unique, I like how you mentioned that no one can stay sinless, despite their good heart or intentions. We all have sinned and have made many mistakes, but we can't accomplish nothing by dwelling on sins we've already committed. I think this is a strong poem and that the simple words used makes it better.

Very good write!! I really enjoyed this. The flow is flawless and I love the ending. The last word is the last stanza was nonrhyming. Good call!! It made the whole piece. Interesting subject also. I look forward to seeing more :-)

Danika.