This somehow reminded me of the exorcist. i like how you showed your transition from innocent to possessed. dark indeed.

Dear sister Rusheena, that was excellent! No forced rhymes, to me is was not a dark poem but a true picture of the world and those held captive by Satan! He does send strong delusion but in your poem we see a conviction of sin and a fear of God through the knowledge of his word from the Book of Revelation of those being neither "Hot" nor "Cold" in serving him. You are serving him through your poems! 10/10, I love this poem, it will be in my favorites. Brother Ken