Short but deep. I like the imagery put here.
the title goes perfectly with the poem.

As I wait for
the black widow's kiss.

^^^^^^^^^^
looooovvve this part!!! i really do love it! :) 5/5

Queen Ashlin

Ahhh!! Love love love!

Very well done with this form Rusheena. I love the suspense in this piece, the chills it can give one when reading..the fact that you can do that in a short piece really displays your talent.

Awesome job!

Perfect piece!

Sweet in a spidery kind of way. You nailed this one. Great job.

Thanks for the awesome comments, people :)

Ewwwww.... yukky!

Very very powerful poem, you have definitely mastered this form and capturing the short powerful imgae in the few lines.

This to me represents power and control of an abuser over their victim. The web is the emotional distress and torture that keeps the victim there, the fear that stops them from being able to move. Trapped.

Very nicely worded!

The imagery in this write is quite clear.A good job indeed.