Awh this poem is really blunt to me and in a way sorry to say this average i have heard this poem in some way or another heck i've done this type of poetry once or twice and i really thought i need to approve...if i'm too harsh i am sorry but i REALLY like that you put your emotions in this poem...besides that it's good sweetie 4/5

Queen Ashlin

Wow, I love the wayyou formated this poem, outstanding job, really deep and emotional!