The lonely tree

I really like the idea of this piece, the comments and edits suggested by others already though are all very well pointed out - I agree completely. Your style is interesting and the way you got your voice to stand out within the piece is great.

Your this poem is nice,
A tree which is planted on road , life has has so many stages
I think you have written here last stage of life.
you u please explain me. am thinking right?

The experts tell us to avoid the clichés

I read in the road of nowhere while thinking on the road to nowhere

This free flowing poem had natural imagery . The twist of the wording make me think deeper and that is better than good :)

A great poem that gets you lost in your own thoughts. I like the brevity of it, as it adds to the mysterious mood created by the "road of nowhere."

I think this has a great vivid start. Just wishing there was a bit more to it. It kinda just leaves you hanging with one stanza. Great start tho!

*~BrittBratt~*