This is beautiful. that person has no idea what she is missing

Awe,

this is such a lovely, sweet poem, the love goes deep in this poem. too bad it didnt work out. . but it definitely is a lovely poem , I hope the person at least knows you felt this. Nice work

Tenderly written. What a lovely piece you have here!

WOW, outstanding job, truly splendid!! so much emotion and imagery, OUTSTANDING!!

Wow ok. This on spoke to my heart because it is beautiful and tender and full of love and emotion. It makes you think though that how magical it is to sit next to your love looking at the majestic of the sky as it is romantic and mysterous like love can be. I love how you love this person and how you keep them close :). Your love poems are beautiful and so full of great imagery. Everyline is full of love and I can tell you put your heart into each one. Please dont change your writing 5/5

Amazing! Beautifully executed! Marvellous piece of writing! So delicate! I visualised your words in my head! You're very talented at playing with words! (: