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by Thomas Mar 30, 2013 category : Love, romance / desired love
Time is moving forward but we are not. Hide and seek without being sought. Keep it fresh or let it rot. The odds are rarely very clear. But they go up every time you're near. Your direction is where I'll steer. It's cause I love you my dear. The reasons why are always in doubt. In our heads the battle is fought. Causing so much noise and getting too loud. The odds are rarely very clear. But they go up every time you're near. Your direction is where I'll steer. It's cause I love you my dear. Caught by life is what we are. Unsure if I'm shooting short or very far. But hey, they say love is a war. The odds are rarely very clear. But they go up every time you're near. Your direction is where I'll steer. It's cause I love you my dear. So fight on is what I think. Conquer the sea or drown and sink. Love and war, it's the one true link. The odds are rarely very clear. But they go up every time you're near. Losing you is what I fear. It's cause I love you my dear.
by Baby Rainbow
The reasons why is always in doubt. In our heads the battle is fought. Causing so much noise and getting too loud. - change "is" in the second line to "are" Excellent poem, the repetition made this really work and the flow was short and fast like a song. I got a little rhythm going while reading this. Very powerful words Thomas.