I LOVE this!!!
But what I love the most about it is the use of the "yellow shadow" <--- now this is smart:)
How it dries the rain droplets, and pushes the black cloud away.
The "good ones" won yayy.
Awesome jon Saffie:)

OH SAFFIE!! a powerfully inspiring piece... I sure hope that yellow shadow keeps pushing it's way in and forces that black cloud away forever...

Saffie, i like it, on how you play the things in this poem with heroes and at the same time villains in our life, there can be no life without ins and outs just like nature with prey and predator...thumbs up

This is really well written love the images you portrait...
This is I'm guessing about the day and night clash with the sun being the yellow shadow... I started going towards... It being maybe a guardian angel.... Either way I think it sets both thoughts off... Well done saff