Sincerely, your Confidante (Triolet)

I have been dieing to come comment this since I saw it on Facebook....and now that I'm here I am like speechless..I think you did amazing with this...I hate repition and I think its so hard to do...but you nailed this Triolet Meme and I am so in love with the title!

Amazing job!

Meme- I love this form, the Triolet is a pretty form.. I felt a comforting peace, as if to say to the one that they can let go and feel comfort and love in the arms of a friend, confidant... oh this is elegant!

That's beautiful...in ways I relate being an Auntie and how I'd react with what any of my nephews would confess, but also I see as a teacher and the fact that I'd always be there to comfort, but I wouldn't always be able to hold confessions in like that.

I also thought of it as a metaphor for confessing to God about sins, and it would work as to say that you lean on him, and his heart and his guidance at times...

You penned a nice piece Meme.
It flowed really well and the title was eye catching and a nice short form that still gets the reader thinking.

:) xx

Impressive poem Meme. This made me think of a mother comforting her child.

I liked the chosen form, I think your lines fit well together and the poem flowed.
I really liked your title!

Nice work.