Comments : Jesus (Cinquain)

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Brilliant!

  • 11 years ago

    by Masked metaphor

    Absolutely love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is very impressive, I have not yet been brave enough to do this form.

    You matched the rules spot on. Well done

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Well you created a lovely formed piece here.. the message is very spiritual and the form added the perfect touch. I admire poetry that sings of a souls spirituality... Beautiful piece!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh my gosh I forgot about Cinquains!!

    THIS WAS PERFECT!!...amazing topic, amazing words, I absolutely would not change a thing or pick another form for this...Beautiful!!

    Never lose faith! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by anand singh

    I am not familiar with the many forms of poetry, but must say that in only a few words you have penned a beauty here.Yes, he is all that and more, he's our savior.
    an enjoyable read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Piogga

    Hi

    I think this is a lovely poem. What I really liked about it is the tone of it. It's calming in a way, plus the form you chose for it is perfect.