Comments : With Love.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This is so sweet of you to write for your friend. I love that you wrote this in the view of the dog, and how the little darling is capable of empathy, and love. This is so sweet. So much good poetry I'm reading this morning! This brought a tear to my eye.

    "If I could go to the school with her every morning,
    and have lunch together so she won't feel alone,
    I would."

    That was so sad. You know that the girl in this piece comes home and loves on her pet, because truly, they always love you no matter what. I love that about my dog. There's not very much animal poetry on here - and you did it very well, my lovely.

    I hope to see something like this again from you. One of your best pieces, in my opinion. If I could nominate this - I would.

    Added to my favorites.

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Pretty poem :)
    I liked it!
    Well written!