That was really entertaining, Kips, and so appropriate on this Easter Day:)

But God had to forsake His only Son
For a sinner like me to be won,
And when Christ cried out to Him,
His killers thought He was a whim.

^^
whim or whimp?

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

It's the Chritians' license of Hope; being that Christ resurrected. We thank you for such a good one..

So many do not know him and so many rejected him, I can only hope that one day everyone will wake up and realize that there is no true life without Christ Jesus.An enjoyable read.Take care.

A beautiful poem Kips:)
I love the story you shared here about Jesus Christ and how it has a significance in your life! Nice description of events!
Keep writing:)

Kips- I do love spirituality poems... this piece is very powerful and holds true, to your faith.. I admire the rhyme scheme pattern... it flows very nicely throughout... simply said: Beautiful!

Wonderful Piece Kips!!!