This is a poem at peace. I see a powerful message in this and it holds a lot of meaning than its size. I like the style/format used. Its great!!:)
Nominated^^

Oh, what a world that would be! I love shadormas because you can only use a few words tell a complete story or share a message, and nailed it. Beautiful and thought provoking work :)

Like the idea
'Shadorma' I might have to try one of those me thinks.

You have written a simple poem with a huge message, a message of peace. where the world is one big family, there are no borders, no conflict, no pending war, no current war.
Just unity and harmony.

now onto the word 'boundaries' I say it as two syllables ( bound - drees) yet it appears as if it is written as 3? (bound-are-rees)

which is right?

:P boundaries has 3 syllables

bound- a- ries