Awesome poem :)

I really love the meaning in this poem, I think you have a great talent for wording, and portraying the imagery in poetry, but again try to work on your layout and punctuation more. You will get a lot more readers and followers, when they can come and read your poem clearly without having to stumble on when to pause and stop one image, and follow on with another image.

Your work has so much potential. Your ideas are very creative and offer a lot of thought to the reader, lots of depth and emotion in which many will relate to.

another great poem.