Powerful piece!

Very sad and emotional piece. you spelled Straight wrong but otherwise very good 5/5

Exceptionaly dark if im reading this right.forceful..i can feel(again its my interpretation)your aggitation which i greatly sympathize with.there's a"kick azz and taken names"feel about some of your writing which i like...attitude works for you and im gnna read more

Good piece. got a little scared by the end :P