I loved the topic and loved the rhyming. The deep imagination poured in the poem revealed how you are able to introduce such thought provoking poems. This made me read it twice to sink and feel it. Thank you Rusheena for sharing this about Baby Rainbow.

Well Rusheena, I don't really know what to say. This was so touching and full of inspiration.

The story it told was very moving and I think represents all the broken-winged birds out there who cannot fly as of yet, but they will in time.

As for the layout, I think it worked fine to be honest, and the flow and subtle rhyme was smooth for me also so I do not see an issue there.

The courage within the poem and motivation to fight for life is breath taking. I truly was very touched by this and it will always be a special poem to me,

Thank you for sharing this :) xxxx