Comments : Preserved Ink

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Natasha, our poetry goes on for decades, as long as we stay true to who we are, and once we are gone from this world, our poetry can still touch, still inspire...its great to see you cataloguing it, just makes me feel a bit sad that you feel you need to do this now, that this piece sounds like you are giving something to be known for, remembered by...

    you're beautiful, your'e poetry is beautiful.

    Just a few "i"'s that need capitalising, otherwise, great flow and thoughts...
    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    The message that this piece holds is anazing!!!
    Anyone can tell that this poem is sincere.
    Love this wish I could nominate it:)
    Great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Everything you write is so creative, woman. Sometimes I just like..I don't even know what to say. xD

    "My chest is now a precious cage,
    protecting those who i've treasured."

    This piece is absolutely lovely. It's not just storing them in a box, I can see how it can mean your mean chest as in "heart", which is so clever, and totally sweet.

    There's a few "i"s that are lowercase. Just a head's up. :)

    Lovely write, Natasha :)