Comments : Not Your Sun

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    Will there be a rainbow without the sun rays?
    Hmmmm I dont think so, and why does the sun shine?
    It shines for you, us, and for everyone!!!
    Sun is life if there was no sun there will be no life, abd when we wake up everyday arent we ourselves? At least smile and shine for yourself.
    And Im sure many love you for who you are, I dont think the sun frowned because of you.

    This is a really heartfelt poem, great job Saffie:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Angie

    No no no Saffie my sweet... do not let that black cloud back in .... there is not a thing wrong with my little cuddler, you ARE sunshine, you are a kind hearted young lady, beautiful inside and out and you have the power Saffie, the power to kick that damn black cloud to oblivian and let the sun shine all the time!! This is another emotional and sad write...

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This really tore at me Saffie, it started out optimistic and then that sadness just overtook the sun, and I have to admit, I had tears, and I couldn't stop them.

    Darl, You are worthy of sun, and that sun does shine for you, the darkness comes into our lives and our biggest test of strength is pushing it away, but you can do it, I know you can, I want that sun to shine on you, because you deserve it. Don't ever think that who you are isn't the person you should be, be proud of yourself, you're a beautiful heart, a talented writer, a great friend, we have flaws and make mistakes but no one should ever stop you from being yourself...

    Hugs you, and ever need to talk, just message me, okay? I'm here

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