Interesting poem.Good job.

"you told me we need some fresh air, the telluric force of earth beneath our trembling feet. you say things i can't comprehend.my limitations increase every day as you repeat your mantras, trying or finding a sacred deeper meaning in life.

i can't connect with the universe; you said i'm too young to be so coward.i am."

I love the flow and descriptions in this piece. Well done!

"but you never look back and i am too old to believe our cosmic debt or even the elements shall keep us whole."

Perfect ending.