I have no idea, only a mod can say. I think

But back to the question... Where do all the lonely people go? I think to go where they are no longer feeling lonely ?

One may be in a crow and feeling lonely so they may want to go alone to feel all right... Those alone may want to go find a group an perhaps not feel lonely..

Just sharing some thoughts, I like the poem.

A poem that gives the reader to think a lot about. There are so many lonely people in this planet and at times we just don't know but can see it on one's face.

This read can also taken as a war within oneself and how it fights to get out of this hole of loneliness while seeing others around oneself in the same situation..interesting write :)

I think, by putting commas around the borrowed words/sentences it should be ok...I would call it wordsmithing. Having said that...when you also use your own..it's making the poem slightly busy looking right now. I know you want the reader to pause in between Me, Myself and I but you could always use my little favourite (...) for this? This probably wouldn't work if you are trying to separate the characters I know as you speak of them in past tense and they seem to have a separate identity from you right now...hope you know what I mean...you are speaking in third person and past tense all rolled into one?

It needs a bit of work IMO but...it was an interesting read....just needs a little tightening up here and there...maybe a bit of a haircut in some lines :)

I do love Eleanor Rigby BTW..one of my favourite songs.

I like this poem, nice work.

Heh great one belongs to a stranger to I one

Heh great one belongs to a stranger to I one

This is very unique, although kind of awkward to read with the beginning of the sentences start with "Me" and"myself" instead of I ...but I definitely understand what you were going for, and it works...just not used to reading in third person, I suppose. :) The repetition of using me, myself and I work really well, so good job.

I think you are trying to use the "Me" and Myself" and "I" as three different people, especially caught onto that in the 'I' is burned out and lazy, going crazy, changes, changes, changes, it's never easy." ... because if you were meaning yourself, you would say 'I' AM burned out and lazy ...and so on.

I think I'm beginning to confuse myself by trying to explain... I hope you will understand and know that I know what you are saying by this poem, but I just can't write it properly in this damn comment. Haha

Anywho,

I like the addition of the bits and pieces from Eleanor Rigby ... it gives it character.

Overall, a really nice piece of work. I like something that is very thought provoking and makes me think outside the box.

Adding to my favorites! :)

I don't think you've broken any rules, so long you give them proper credit, like mentioning the lines along with the author in your author's note.

I love those lines, powerful and really stimulating. I think you did well, combining them with your creative ideas.

Nice poem!

Great poem!!

This poem is astounding, its unusual and original, which is what all poets crave. Your descriptions r uncanny and well worded*^^ keep writing

True lines ..

You're better then many of the higher rated poets, just saying.

Dean-

On point.

Nice poem

Great poem

I love this poem!

Wow, I like this one too!!! Very good write dear! :)

*~BrittBratt~*

That's truly an interesting work, the use of the outdated phrase "me, myself and I", has been completely twisted around and used in such an innovative manner

This is a great piece.

The use of me myself and I saying used and twisted because of the loneliness, nicely done.

Em

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