I most definitely agree! Peace can be hard to come by, not only because of everything that goes on in the world but our everyday lives and the how busy they become. If we don't enjoy them, we will never learn to appreciate it. I felt that bit of serenity reading this, you worded it so well. Only thing I noticed, you had a few 'has' in your poem that should be 'as' :) I'm assuming auto-correct did that for you haha. Well done though, I love the expression of thought here.

You have a way with words and this poem flows nicely I like it a lot

Fourth line should be "as" not "has" sorry and i totally agree with the poem you have to live in the moment "vive en el momento!" that's my motto it's the same thing in english "live in the moment" and you my friend have made my day! :) 5/5

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