Goodbye or see you later?

by Adriana   Apr 2, 2013


Should i tell you goodbye forever or just goodbye for now?
would it ever get any easier either way?

i miss you so much but everyone says that you are doing just fine without me....is that true?? if it is then my actions will be simple i will let you go forever.

.....but even if in some far away place in the depths of your heart you do miss me i promise i will be here waiting for you with open arms

and if u think of me on occasion i will let you live your life with out me as a goodbye for now

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  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I like your title, it's always great to have a question to draw the reader in and make them think about what the poem is about. Often in relationships, couples take breaks for several reasons, yet the true question is do you say goodbye forever or see you later, part your ways and possibly get back together once everyone sorts out. You have a nice basis for your poem and such, however grammar could use some work. U should be you, and I's should always always always be capitalized. You definitely write in an interesting form, almost like prose. You just let your thoughts flow naturally and it shows. Good job, I'd definitely suggest focusing on grammar though.

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