Comments : Just a girl

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Wow... This one struck home with me, nicely done.

    Everyone around her in pain
    every single heart was slain
    reaching havock on her brain
    It was hard for her to abstain

    ^^^
    this part especially struck a cord in my heart, one of my favorites of yours. Excellent job, keeping penning :) 5/5 from me

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    This is so amazing. I can feel the pain as I read this. Great poem.