Comments : Swift & Invisible [Haiku Chain]

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    MaryAnne- You pen beauty in this chained haiku... it reminds me of a daisy chain.. <3

    the light of nature can not be felt by artificial light in the darkness.... moonlight upon a balcony is one of the remarkable kinds of light... this nature piece holds more than nature... the 2nd stanza: holds a powerful feeling of wishes and hope of a fresh new light perhaps... Oh I love poems that hold more angles than meets the eye... Beautiful!