A Dawn Breaks.....

by williamsji   Apr 3, 2013


A dawn breaks.......

The dawn mist melts down,
On the shoulders of your
Green valley swiftly;
The face is full of ice cubes;
Sprinkled in and around,
and on your red cheeks.
The mid-sun shines on top,
On the smoothness of your
Pink naval softly;
The body is full of ray drops;
Sparked in and around,
and on your spicy breasts.

BY
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
williamsji@yahoo.com
www.williamsji.com
From MICROTHEMES, a collection of short poems, written by WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The dawn mist melts down,
    On the shoulders of your
    Green valley swiftly;

    ^^You have painted a lovely picture of passion with a mix of nature..lovely!

    The face is full of ice cubes;
    Sprinkled in and around,
    and on your red cheeks.

    ^^Another lovely to read. The descriptions of
    morning dew drops in contrast to the lady love..nice imagery.

    The mid-sun shines on top,
    On the smoothness of your
    Pink naval softly;

    ^^An image of a woman sleeping as the sun shine plays colors upon her body. All in all a very passionate and lively read!

    • 11 years ago

      by williamsji

      Dear Meena Krish,
      Many thanks for your valuable comments and appreciation of my poem.
      Keep writing and commenting.

      Regards
      WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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