The dawn mist melts down,
On the shoulders of your
Green valley swiftly;

^^You have painted a lovely picture of passion with a mix of nature..lovely!

The face is full of ice cubes;
Sprinkled in and around,
and on your red cheeks.

^^Another lovely to read. The descriptions of
morning dew drops in contrast to the lady love..nice imagery.

The mid-sun shines on top,
On the smoothness of your
Pink naval softly;

^^An image of a woman sleeping as the sun shine plays colors upon her body. All in all a very passionate and lively read!