Numb

So, technically a senyru is supposed to be of funny nature.. so boo for being down right depressing, haha!

You threw together a bunch of (sad) fragments to compile it in here.. so many broken thoughts which stems from the broken feeling. When you're numb, sad and can't function, who can form a full thought or sentence? It worked really well here where typically it would feel jumbled.. you just know with the emotion that realistically it should! I'm reading into it a little more than I should I'm sure, but just my thoughts, lol. Good job!

Very straight & to the point once again. Each word is like a stab to the heart, the pain becomes more & more intense. So much sadness :/ Another lovely job! I wish I had more to say, forms are always so hard to comment on! This type of writing is definitely your forte :)

Short but intense, great poem