Thank you a poem for my friend

by Sherwin Talapian   Apr 5, 2013


"thank you"

i must say it to you.
that I'm so thankful.
i might say it's short.
but for me it's helpful.
you make me happy.
even though it's painful.
that someone has already have you.
but i choose my own stupidity.
because i want you so crazy.
even though your not free.
I'll be blind so i don't see.
that you have a reason.
for not choosing me.
girl you know I'm so thankful.
for giving me a chance.
just being near at you.
and throwing msg at me.
calling me "pre".
you know for me it's sweet .
even though we cant be together.
you're the only girl that i loved.
but for me you're the only girl .
that i who can't be loved.
and to you I'm so thankful.
as being part of my life.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Sherwin

    I like your poem, even I think the long one verse can be difficault to use. I believe in shorter verses like 2, 3, 4, 5, even up to 8 lines.
    Then you will be able to make stories in stories, instaed of a long story, that can be confusing to read the longer it gets. The content in your poem is great, keep on writing

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Aw... thanks sir.. it will help me a lot i will make better next time... !!!

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