by Darren
Line one is very catchy, crawling into somebodies thoughts....very clever. |
by Rythmer21
Do you mean, "Don't let there be hope, let it be real." |
by Rythmer21
Anyone have any more advice or critique on this poem? It's interesting to here what people think and it helps me become a better writer! :) |
Wow, this is intense, so powerful with emotion, I loved it, I find the way you opened it up into the beginning was very well done, two thumbs up |
Wow, this is intense, so powerful with emotion, I loved it, I find the way you opened it up into the beginning was very well done, two thumbs up |
by average thoughts
I loved this poem..perfect.. |
by Rythmer21
Thanks! :) I changed it, does it sound OK to you now? |