Comments : Listening to Thoughts

  • 11 years ago

    by mandy

    I have this too :). Use your brain to be creative when you're over-thinking things, use the things that slow you down to your advantage! 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Where there's Understanding, there's grace. As long as you live, you can win. Staying alive, is saving stress. Indeed beautifully worded!

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    This is a LOVELY poem Tainted Melody and it rhymes just like the ones that I write and so like!
    True poetry!
    The poem expresses your feelings so very well and I really enjoyed reading it, and the image that your words painted.

  • 11 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow!! I really loved this poem. You took something that happens to all of us and you actually made it into a poem that not only rhymed but was filled with emotion. I thought this was very well written. And no worries. I am gonna try and write again soon. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    A sweet and lovely poem TM...

    keep writing:)