Old American Worker

by Robert   Apr 7, 2013


A concrete sidewalk, and an old town house
Decorated by maple leaves to bring arouse
Painted by the sun, and a warm summer breeze
I walked under the shade of many maple tree's

My morning's were slow, but I always speed up
When I smell the sweetness of good maple syrup
Drizzled upon my pancakes, a good hardy meal
I was ready for my work on old automobiles

I punched in my time slip, and steam filled the air
From the compression of many machines, and good old flair
There was something to be had, when made by your hands
when you combine common knowledge, and knowingly understand

From morning till close I break things in
Connecting many idea's that would cause your head to spin
Making the locomotive, and pushing past limits
With the combustion of heat made it all the intimate

I was a creator of un-paralleled propulsion
But on a second note a man with very little compulsion
I loved solving riddles, and was known to be a philosopher
As I would sit on my porch in my gold leaf rocker

Living up the dream however we are to interpret
Freedom was an obsession, but you still must work for it
I walk under the shade of many maple tree's
because I created transportation, and now live a life at ease

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  • 11 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I love the rhyme and rhytym in your poems Robert as I do this one :) Its got like a "swing to it! :D

    Love the story told too. Keep pennin 'em!

    ~ Olwin

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Hmm let's see,

    This is only my opinion and I'm not a professional writer so feel at ease and also feel free to overlook it.

    I felt the rhyme scheme took away from this poem. There are some good images, ( the pancakes in the morning and maple syrup yum!!) but then there were parts that at least to me felt that were thrown out there to continue with the rhyme scheme. I know this is describing the journey of the American worker. But hmm I m not sure how to explain, it was well done for the most part but I do feel it needs a little bit more, to narrate a little bit more, I like the beginning and the ending... The middle part is the part were I feel may need some more description. ( that's could just be me and reading at 3 am) so I'll be back when I'm fully awake.

    • 11 years ago

      by Robert

      I like poems, story poems, and am a big fan of Robert Frost. I can make poems go on and on and on with a plot in my head, so it is very hard for me to sum it up, and create a good ending. I understand how u feel thoigh.