Choices

by therhesha   Apr 9, 2013


Life is an ample of challenges
In one glance there is a change
But don't give up to look ahead
Prepare your self for that change instead

Learn to live and try to fly
No matter how and drop the why
Opportunity won't say goodbye
If you were there to stand by

When everything has went wrong
Make an effort to hold on
Sometimes patience is an option
Moreover your resolution

Life is not a series of chances
But it is a series of choices
Choose wisely for your happiness
Cause it is the way to your success.

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  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    Um..when you say "life is not a series of chances but choices" you are speaking to a power of mind that transcends the accidents of fate..or so I take it. In a way your poem is Taoist insofar as it speaks to a "going with the flow" of life.on the other hand one could take your "choices over chance" part and conclude you're an idealist(someone who believes that anything is possible if we put our minds to it).so, I find an internal conflict of message in the poem. I'm conflicted about the sobriety, the casual manner with which you speak of "life". I'm of the opinion that whenever someone speaks of life IN GENERAL not only is much necessarily cast aside in so doing but what it really amounts to is a look into the heart and mind OF THE SPEAKER. In short, I'm suspicious of sweeping philosophical statements such as"life is this"or"life is that".

    • 11 years ago

      by therhesha

      As you speak with the heart and mind of the speaker, with chances over choices. It just carry an idea that the life we live don't defend with the things that surround us but with the decision we make and actions we execute. thus uphold the bliss of success we might encounter throughout the journey.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    Hey Teresa! First off, I want to say glad to have you in the club! Secondly, I really wanted to say that I enjoyed reading this piece out loud and notice how the words roll off my tongue so easily.

    "Learn to live and try to fly
    No matter how and drop the why"
    This is definitely an empowering poem and what people need to read in order to push on with life no matter how hard it may be. I seldom read poems which try to empower readers and I am glad you chose to write something about it. Nice work!

    • 11 years ago

      by therhesha

      Heartwarming thank you for accepting me in your club.

  • 11 years ago

    by Vic Johns

    Nice uplifting moral message in your poem, everyone gets a knock back, but get over it and be the wiser for it, it'll make you stronger!

    Ps has went wrong, not is went wrong

    Great stuff !

    • 11 years ago

      by therhesha

      Aw okey and thanks for your your compliment
      next time I will double check my grammar.

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