Deep In The Woods (Acrostic)

by Maple Tree   Apr 9, 2013


Dressed in a smile, I long to feel
Emerald shades of freshly sprouts
Emerging from an unknown
Path of peace, tranquility.

Internally I die from heartbreak
Not wanting to hear "whispering goodbyes".

Tangled in webbed sorrow and anguish
Heavy weights are carried away from an
Eagle soaring in the sky.

Wishing to capture a river nearby; I spy
Owl's lurking from the bowels of a deep
Overlay of moss, where I can rest my
Drowsy eyes, awaking from this nightmare,
Sobering up, to see the sunshine once again.

*Saffie's Title Toss, thank you sweet one*

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  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    "whispering goodbyes".

    Dearest Andrea, I am seduced by your poems, there are such a power even i quiet statements-

    Love it Ole

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wishing to capture a river nearby; I spy
    Owl's lurking from the bowels of a deep
    Overlay of moss, where I can rest my
    Drowsy eyes, awaking from this nightmare,
    Sobering up, to see the sunshine once again.

    ^^ this whole stanza....WHOA...Just beautifully written, perfect descriptions, the readers can visualize it as well as feel it...

    I sooo admire this write from you Andrea, to have written it in pain, yet end this piece in sunshine...thats beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by Treehugger

    I love this poem. I also love nature so I was drawn into this poem. Beautiful. 5/5

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