Uncharted

I really enjoyed the first two stanza's of your poem and to be honest with you would have never guessed that this poem really has no profound meaning to you. Your comment at the end drastically diminshes your poem. Of which I feel it does not diserve. Quite the oposite really, from first glance this poems seems to be written from the heart, It seems to know exactly where its going showing no sign that you dont even know what the poem is about.
the third stanza (being the last and most important stanza) fell a bit short for me. Fall and Lethal do not ryhme unless your force the wrong sound out of the word "lethal" of which we as readers do not do. I liked what it says, but being the the rest of the poem flows and rhymes well, the third stanza threw it a bit off course. Excellent poem none the less.

I thought this poem was about life and how we can go through certain things that are hard and people wonder why we don't move on. I also thought it was about how life can be uncharted and lethal based on our decisions we make. I really like this one. Very nice write. :) 5/5

I thought this poem was about life and how we can go through certain things that are hard and people wonder why we don't move on. I also thought it was about how life can be uncharted and lethal based on our decisions we make. I really like this one. Very nice write. :) 5/5

I love it, I love this poem soooo much! It is soooo good i is magic, enchanting, fastastic poem, I especially loved the middle verse, I can relate to that completely!!! 100/100