Moon Siren [haiku]

This has so much beautiful imagery. Wow!

The seas breath whispered.... I love how you make the sea alive as if it has a very true voice. That was outstanding. Nature can feel alive to a lot of people. I love how you made the sea whispered as it is in love or has a secret that no one knows about. The vague I like because it leaves the readers minder to wonder and think about what the sea wants.I can imagine a siren singing on a rock somewhere with the moon dancing as the the light that shines on her. She is beautiful and serene and calm as can be! I can imagine the waves dancing around. The stars glistening with the moon. Beautiful write! 5/5

Beautiful haiku..

Adore "siren songs" when desscribing the melodies of the moon... using whispers and serene is also captivating in this haiku... very pretty piece!

Nice! I like it :)